tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post5007929649666328727..comments2023-05-14T07:58:39.780-06:00Comments on My Inner Fairy: Weekend Writing Warriors 3/10Summer Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-65323547545992383952013-03-17T11:26:53.373-06:002013-03-17T11:26:53.373-06:00WOW. Powerful excerpt!WOW. Powerful excerpt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-58459957163698495652013-03-12T19:44:45.097-06:002013-03-12T19:44:45.097-06:00Hmm...makes you wonder if he's got more in min...Hmm...makes you wonder if he's got more in mind than cutting her finger off.<br />Nice 8!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-52349563700568975272013-03-11T17:08:39.020-06:002013-03-11T17:08:39.020-06:00Ooh, tense! I loved the pace and the way it had me...Ooh, tense! I loved the pace and the way it had me holding my breath!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-83468082567496557722013-03-11T14:01:09.846-06:002013-03-11T14:01:09.846-06:00Omg, amazing 8! So much panic, very intense. I hop...Omg, amazing 8! So much panic, very intense. I hope you'll put up more next week, please!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17961489299769954315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-27684142765227268152013-03-10T21:08:21.686-06:002013-03-10T21:08:21.686-06:00Oh, good, she got free, but I don't think that...Oh, good, she got free, but I don't think that's the end of it. Intense snippet, Summer. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-92064724881783441542013-03-10T20:50:48.575-06:002013-03-10T20:50:48.575-06:00Whoa, daddy's angry. Did she fall back because...Whoa, daddy's angry. Did she fall back because he got the ring or because he rethought his anger and let go? I hope the latter.Claire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-55912613325439635312013-03-10T17:22:27.337-06:002013-03-10T17:22:27.337-06:00Wow... that was intense. Well done and thanks for ...Wow... that was intense. Well done and thanks for sharing. Hopefully she gets through this in one piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-27434858219497614622013-03-10T16:47:21.224-06:002013-03-10T16:47:21.224-06:00Chop off her finger? Ugh, what a nasty father. I w...Chop off her finger? Ugh, what a nasty father. I wonder how she'll fight back. Great snippet!meryvamphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07233468177700177135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-71897428441652412932013-03-10T15:39:03.242-06:002013-03-10T15:39:03.242-06:00Tense and emitional snippet. I hope her father con...Tense and emitional snippet. I hope her father controls his anger before it's too late. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04556031831830621195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-13612171355512356192013-03-10T15:38:18.760-06:002013-03-10T15:38:18.760-06:00Wow! What an intense scene and a great tease. :)Wow! What an intense scene and a great tease. :)Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-14723930054247413252013-03-10T14:51:47.777-06:002013-03-10T14:51:47.777-06:00What a nasty guy! Makes me appreciate my Dad more...What a nasty guy! Makes me appreciate my Dad more, that's for sure.<br /><br />You've used the word "caught" in two successive sentences. Might want to change one of them, or just delete the second one. <br /><br />Very tense eight. Well done!Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-57785527679385537252013-03-10T14:01:52.703-06:002013-03-10T14:01:52.703-06:00Great intensity and nastiness here. Daddy's no...Great intensity and nastiness here. Daddy's not very reasonable, I see. (Love the rabbit in a trap simile, FYI. Creates a great visual association.)Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-58243409388418362152013-03-10T13:15:38.184-06:002013-03-10T13:15:38.184-06:00Very intense. Her father is super ticked off.Very intense. Her father is super ticked off.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-79252797290290775332013-03-10T11:45:50.127-06:002013-03-10T11:45:50.127-06:00Well, I'm hooked! What an intense reaction fr...Well, I'm hooked! What an intense reaction from her father! Looking forward to the next instalment.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-17184279463881496082013-03-10T11:40:15.980-06:002013-03-10T11:40:15.980-06:00Oh, wow. Great writing! Can't wait to find ou...Oh, wow. Great writing! Can't wait to find out what happens...Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-86482569944201400172013-03-10T10:55:45.914-06:002013-03-10T10:55:45.914-06:00Wow, do you ever know how to hook a girl. Fabulous...Wow, do you ever know how to hook a girl. Fabulous eight! I'll be back for more! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-12318111260676594702013-03-10T10:28:38.109-06:002013-03-10T10:28:38.109-06:00Wow, this is quite a scene we've walked into, ...Wow, this is quite a scene we've walked into, very intense. I hope she can get away unscathed. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-74641932786761521212013-03-10T10:25:32.422-06:002013-03-10T10:25:32.422-06:00Whoa! That was intense! Great 8!!Whoa! That was intense! Great 8!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-23105840593708776142013-03-10T10:17:08.598-06:002013-03-10T10:17:08.598-06:00I love the intensity of this snippet. Not father o...I love the intensity of this snippet. Not father of year, is he?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-2475212765941693572013-03-10T09:54:33.868-06:002013-03-10T09:54:33.868-06:00Oh my stars! What kind of father tries to chop off...Oh my stars! What kind of father tries to chop off his daughters finger? Totally freaked me out! Wasn't expecting that at all. Very, very nice, m'dear.India Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655550748159559852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-49111682840734872632013-03-10T09:48:57.004-06:002013-03-10T09:48:57.004-06:00Very intense snippet! Definitely got me wondering ...Very intense snippet! Definitely got me wondering what's going to happen next. Hope you continue with this next Sunday!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-87031959109354677882013-03-10T09:34:13.113-06:002013-03-10T09:34:13.113-06:00Great 8. I tweeted. Great 8. I tweeted. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-33722625827510522912013-03-10T09:24:16.516-06:002013-03-10T09:24:16.516-06:00Oh wow! That's an intense eight. Great work!Oh wow! That's an intense eight. Great work!Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08965434230302395649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-15724265438008441672013-03-10T09:20:12.178-06:002013-03-10T09:20:12.178-06:00Oh my... How is she going to get out of this, I wo...Oh my... How is she going to get out of this, I wonder? I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my fingernails and crying over having to wait a whole week to see what happens next.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-50639713953849105612013-03-10T09:07:06.776-06:002013-03-10T09:07:06.776-06:00Nice suspense and detail!Nice suspense and detail!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.com