tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post666345884908849919..comments2023-05-14T07:58:39.780-06:00Comments on My Inner Fairy: Never ending scene entry: NidsSummer Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-43479401728442984182010-10-26T15:58:49.150-06:002010-10-26T15:58:49.150-06:00I want to know more about the nids. Nice set up.I want to know more about the nids. Nice set up.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-78628899698149599072010-10-26T15:25:36.448-06:002010-10-26T15:25:36.448-06:00Love the fairy element. With each step, getting co...Love the fairy element. With each step, getting colder. How cold will she get before she freezes? If she does.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-88387383145132761152010-10-26T14:54:36.205-06:002010-10-26T14:54:36.205-06:00Um...holy lot of comments. No wonder--it was great...Um...holy lot of comments. No wonder--it was great. I have a critique buddy from an online site who does fairy art for a living in Austrailia. <br /><br />her name is Selina Fenech at Farries and Fantasy somethiing or other. Google her. She's great. <br /><br />Thanks for the read. <br /><br />JJodi Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216373059861459896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-66749699418247144282010-10-26T08:37:27.839-06:002010-10-26T08:37:27.839-06:00I love your fantasy characters! Short but intrigui...I love your fantasy characters! Short but intriguing!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-82697381712488592402010-10-26T03:57:05.924-06:002010-10-26T03:57:05.924-06:00Hi,
Moon Meadow, love that name.
As for the &qu...Hi,<br /><br />Moon Meadow, love that name. <br /><br />As for the "nids", great concept and sense of fear attached to these critters: whatever they may be! Kind of reminded me of jungle leech' wavering and awaiting passing host to donate a goodly feast. Good cliffhanger, too. ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-67410929510048649982010-10-26T01:22:58.144-06:002010-10-26T01:22:58.144-06:00Hi Summer, I really enjoyed reading this. Just a s...Hi Summer, I really enjoyed reading this. Just a suggestion, but "chattered" in the last line interrupted the flow of the cliffhanger a little for me. Can you maybe come up with a different word, or refer to her teeth chattering to clarify? Great piece.<br /><br />RachRachael Harriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-86073567624751863912010-10-26T00:23:25.625-06:002010-10-26T00:23:25.625-06:00A short piece, but long enough to draw us in and g...A short piece, but long enough to draw us in and give us a clear image. Nice writing, Summer. Keep up the good work.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-89089170219828881952010-10-25T20:48:23.578-06:002010-10-25T20:48:23.578-06:00Lovely Summer. Very intriguing. The 'nids?'...Lovely Summer. Very intriguing. The 'nids?' New. Great cliffhanger entry..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-23263742694321976172010-10-25T17:45:10.353-06:002010-10-25T17:45:10.353-06:00Interesting. The nids are an intriguing addition t...Interesting. The nids are an intriguing addition to the scene and then there is the cold. I am interested in learning more about the character and the plot in general.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-82805892386384221652010-10-25T17:23:22.208-06:002010-10-25T17:23:22.208-06:00Short but sweet! I liked your imagery and I want t...Short but sweet! I liked your imagery and I want to read more. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-69703683437021031822010-10-25T17:09:12.152-06:002010-10-25T17:09:12.152-06:00That's so mean! So ...what happened next? :PThat's so mean! So ...what happened next? :PLynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-91156533689884414762010-10-25T16:15:42.979-06:002010-10-25T16:15:42.979-06:00Creepy and very strong writing. You have a talent ...Creepy and very strong writing. You have a talent for creating atmosphere. I loved it.J E Fritzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03372746219262163566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-43141203610457978552010-10-25T14:53:37.310-06:002010-10-25T14:53:37.310-06:00I really liked this, you made me want more.I really liked this, you made me want more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01677563505368503476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-70239432498207465002010-10-25T14:06:33.432-06:002010-10-25T14:06:33.432-06:00I liked this line: "Cold crawled up her legs&...I liked this line: "Cold crawled up her legs". Really cool, and kinda creepy!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-6495441907546798292010-10-25T13:43:45.812-06:002010-10-25T13:43:45.812-06:00Thanks so much for telling me when the blogpost wi...Thanks so much for telling me when the blogpost will be going up, Summer. Means a lot to me.<br />--LindseyLindsey Richardsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05479405614100115901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-43280090860460648322010-10-25T12:57:19.740-06:002010-10-25T12:57:19.740-06:00Caught my curiosity wondering what was happening t...Caught my curiosity wondering what was happening to her. Good scene!Nikkihttp://neyska.posterous.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-71014532488584702332010-10-25T12:56:18.042-06:002010-10-25T12:56:18.042-06:00Color me intrigued! :DColor me intrigued! :DMariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-43223147875691327042010-10-25T12:17:10.647-06:002010-10-25T12:17:10.647-06:00Interesting!Interesting!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17401931638397651614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-5515664251222936572010-10-25T11:46:06.066-06:002010-10-25T11:46:06.066-06:00Great entry, Summer! Really curious to know more a...Great entry, Summer! Really curious to know more about this different world you've created!<br />Thanks for the very sweet post on my blog! Hope you'll stop by often.Gabriela Lessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02265214314915980398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-1429255550703926272010-10-25T11:22:51.221-06:002010-10-25T11:22:51.221-06:00Bree~~ Yup I made them up!
J.W.~~ No worries, gla...Bree~~ Yup I made them up!<br /><br />J.W.~~ No worries, glad you stopped by!<br /><br /><br />Thanks everyone for reading!! I'm glad you are enjoying the scene.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-69526919823900087502010-10-25T10:53:07.794-06:002010-10-25T10:53:07.794-06:00This short piece felt just right. The descriptive ...This short piece felt just right. The descriptive quality of the nids was great. "If she moved left, they moved left." That was a creepy little image. Sorry the comment isn't longer, but this was great entry.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />J.W. Parente<br /><a href="jwparente.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">In My Write Mind</a>Justin W. Parentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05951018201906897315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-72726840481027516522010-10-25T10:28:51.697-06:002010-10-25T10:28:51.697-06:00Lots of good imagery here! I had to Google nid to...Lots of good imagery here! I had to Google nid to see if that was real or made up!<br /><br />Great job and good luck!<br /><br />:)Breehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16071207240841595421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-24913661039732273512010-10-25T09:16:00.712-06:002010-10-25T09:16:00.712-06:00Ooooh what a fab ending!! I definitely would like ...Ooooh what a fab ending!! I definitely would like to know what happens next!! Wow! Well done you! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-74738115069074141282010-10-25T09:11:51.793-06:002010-10-25T09:11:51.793-06:00Nice! I'm very intrigued. Why is she getting s...Nice! I'm very intrigued. Why is she getting so cold?Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392110820423124271.post-27369594883884270382010-10-25T08:47:58.690-06:002010-10-25T08:47:58.690-06:00Thanks for sharing your piece! You made me curious...Thanks for sharing your piece! You made me curious about the nids.Shalleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907680428735740943noreply@blogger.com