Two things I've learned during revisions:
First Line:
Last Line:
- Don't under estimate the power of a second strong character, even if he is a vulgar imp named Razzle.
- Anything is subject to change.
- I have reworked it four times.
- I started it January of 2012.
- It's currently into submission.
Here is the first and last lines of Chapter 1:
First Line:
Ebony’s breath slowed. The sound came from her
deceased father’s old study across the small house.
Last Line:
A blue light appeared and he
walked through it, leaving the Manor behind.
Wish me luck!
6 comments:
Good luck! It certainly sounds interesting! :)
You can do it! Great opening as well.
Oh, very nice!!
Sending all my lucky vibes your way!!
Best of luck to you as you submit!! I like the imp's name, Razzle. :) Reworking it 4 times, good for you. I'm sure it's improving each time you do it. Three or four times seems to be about my average for my novels. Nice first and last lines!!
Excellent lines.
Hugs and chocolate,
Shelly
Break a pen, Summer! Want to finish writing my book? :)
Post a Comment