Today is the first part to the Hookers and Hangers Blogfest hosted by Falling for Fiction.
My 'hookers' to my first three chapters...
The rules:
"Here's the deets:
Hookers & Hangers Blogfest July 16th & July 18th
We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!
On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.
On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.
We will be judging everyone’s first three HOOKERS and first three HANGERS. We’ll each pick two winners (MOST ENTICING HOOKER and MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER) making a total of ten winners! Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF! "
My 'hookers' to my first three chapters...
The rules:
"Here's the deets:
Hookers & Hangers Blogfest July 16th & July 18th
We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!
On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.
On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.
We will be judging everyone’s first three HOOKERS and first three HANGERS. We’ll each pick two winners (MOST ENTICING HOOKER and MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER) making a total of ten winners! Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF! "
Hookers from my novel -The Jade Coterie-
Ch. 1
Ebony
Graves slipped out of her bedroom window.
Ch. 2
Unfamiliar eyes settled on Ebony.
Ch. 3
Rose guided Ebony into a large room and walked
back down the hall without a word.
34 comments:
Sounds like it has a horror twist.
These are great! I love how I can already sense a creepy/dark mood :D
I love the name Ebony. Nice hooks!
I really like your first hooker!
Oh each of these paints such a vivid picture. Great job!
Makes the reader NEED to know more! Great job!
Very dark and cool too! Love the name of this blogfest, btw. :)
Ebony Graves - cool name. Great lines.
Great name, great hooks. I like 3 the best.
Really cool hooks! And Ebony Graves, and Rose, really great names.
LOVE the name! And the first one really intrigues me, I want to know more. Can't wait to read your hangers.
I also love the tone you convey through these! Well done!
Nice! And I love that name, Ebony! Thanks for commenting and following!
Great lines! Very mysterious!
I get an eerie feeling off these, great work :)
Intriguing and a little creepy.
They all have an eerie feel to them. Those are excellent hooks!
As curious as I am about your story, the name Ebony Graves has me even more curious. Great job!
Great scene setting with these! No 3 rocks!
Oooooh, I like her name. It's fantastically dark and luscious. It makes me very curious to read more. Good job.
Very cool and moody!
Wowee wowee these are good! So glad I'm finally following you! Thank so much for participating in our blog hop!
There's a really strong thrilling undertone. And I love that my name is in your title :)
These really set the mood! Well done!
I really, really like the first chapter intro.
I agree with the first poster, definitely feels like there is a horror element. Must be the characters name. Good job! I'm a new follower now. Cheers!
Definitely ominous! Good job!
I like the understated feel to these. It really makes me wonder what is going on. Very nice!
Nice hooks. I like the names as well - Ebony and Rose, great names.
excellent first lines! the first is a real hook!
those names make me thing of *darkly cute* things, like the Serenity Rose comic book series, which just makes me want more :D
This one sounds eerie and like it would keep the reader guessing! Nice work.
Perfect hookers and I love the name Ebony:) IS here hair black?
Very nice - and I love your MC's name!
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