Okay, I admit it. Stop twisting my arm. I stole the sentence idea from some else. I saw it on Facebook and wanted to do something similar.
The idea is to post only a few sentences of something I'm working on as a teaser.
Besides I'm a writer and I want to share pieces and parts of what I do.
Here's my five sentences taken from Chapter 1 of my novel ~The Jade Coterie.
“You have a stow away in the back of your vehicle. Stay put, we’ll get her.”
Ebony’s stomach turned and her heart stuttered. A man’s head came into view, a dark shadow against the back drop of sunlight.
“Miss, I’m gonna have to ask you to come with us.”
Ebony braced herself against the back of the metal, “If I refuse?”
“Then I’ll come in there and get you myself.”
Share five sentences from one of your pieces in the comments or feel free to tell me what you think of mine.
The idea is to post only a few sentences of something I'm working on as a teaser.
Besides I'm a writer and I want to share pieces and parts of what I do.
Here's my five sentences taken from Chapter 1 of my novel ~The Jade Coterie.
“You have a stow away in the back of your vehicle. Stay put, we’ll get her.”
Ebony’s stomach turned and her heart stuttered. A man’s head came into view, a dark shadow against the back drop of sunlight.
“Miss, I’m gonna have to ask you to come with us.”
Ebony braced herself against the back of the metal, “If I refuse?”
“Then I’ll come in there and get you myself.”
Share five sentences from one of your pieces in the comments or feel free to tell me what you think of mine.
14 comments:
You selected a riveting five sentences!
Oh poor Ebony!!!
Yay for this teaser - totally awesome!! Take care
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Oooo, these are five compelling sentences, Summer!
Wow. I want to read more!
I love the name Ebony. Great job with the sentences. :)
Great hook! There's trouble coming!
Nice snippet. =)
Nice Snippet. =)
I'm totally hooked. I want to know what's going to happen next. :D
Now I'm wondering if Ebony knew there was a stowaway--or if she's just surprised.
Great excerpt!
Great teaser. It makes me wonder about the stowaway and what's going to happen next.
Eeek!!! The man in the backseat waiting to kill you!!! It's the classic horror story, and it still scares the *poop* out of me! :D <3
That was excellent Summer! Love it!
This sounds intriguing and it could go in so many different directions
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