On most Fridays, I post my five favorite sentences of what I'm working on. This weeks five sentences are-
Taken from my novel- The Jade Coterie- Chapter 3
"She froze, her heart raced in her ears. She backed away until she hit the night table. A sweat broke out on her forehead. The object so awful Ebony just stared at it, hoping it would vanish. A mechanical monster with one sharp fang protruding from a long slender mouth."
Put your five favorite lines from one of your pieces in the comments.
Taken from my novel- The Jade Coterie- Chapter 3
"She froze, her heart raced in her ears. She backed away until she hit the night table. A sweat broke out on her forehead. The object so awful Ebony just stared at it, hoping it would vanish. A mechanical monster with one sharp fang protruding from a long slender mouth."
Put your five favorite lines from one of your pieces in the comments.
13 comments:
I haven't looked at my WIP in so long the words may have vanished from the page. Yours are great!
Oh love that mechanical monster!! Yikes!! Take care
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Great lines, very great atmosphere! I haven't edited anything recently, but hopefully I'll have time soon! :)
A single fang? Interesting!
It's great to read your five sentence Friday posts. :)
I don't blame Ebony for wanting that object to vanish!
Five very descriptive sentences to feed the mind of a reader! '
;)
best
F
I'm horrified too. Tight sentences. I'm right there with her.
Sounds very scary!
A very chilling five sentences! You're very good at creating tension and mood. :)
Great imagery. Your sentences are strong.
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Teresa
Awesome! I love the image you painted.
That was GREAT! Wow, I could see that happening. Hope you had a lovely weekend.
A mechanical monster!? eek! Cool snippet though :)
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