If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Friday, June 29, 2012

Five Sentence Friday

I've started a new short story that I'm really enjoying. Check out five sentences from one of my newest pieces...
 
From a new short story:

"What kind of person eats frozen raspberry butterfly wings? Oh, right...me. That's what happens when a person, like myself, chases a mythical creature and falls down a hole designed to trap humans. Goblins, I'm not sure I'll ever get used to their customs."


Okay, technically 4 sentences, but I really like how I began this one.


What are five sentences from a piece you are working on?

9 comments:

Chris Fries said...

Very captivating beginning! I like the voice. It sounds like a very fun tale!

Julia King said...

Those sentences are BRILLIANT! Well, done Summer!

Misha Gericke said...

Great opening!

Love your blog's new look. Really clean and welcoming. :-)

Cherie Reich said...

Love the opening! Although I don't think I want to eat butterfly wings, even if they are raspberry flavored. :)

Christine Rains said...

Great snippet! I don't think I could ever get use to goblin customs either.

Talli Roland said...

Love the beginning, Summer! Good stuff!

Scribbles From Jenn said...

I love the idea, and the sentences.

Carolyn V said...

Love that first sentence Summer! Amazing. ;)

M Pax said...

I imagine Goblin customs would be hard to take. I really like the start. Hope we get to read the rest some day.

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