If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Hookers/Hangers blogfest-- Hanger entry

Today is part two of the Hookers and Hangers blogfest hosted by Falling for Fiction. I'm supposed to post the last sentence to my first three chapters. Here goes...
 
My 'hanger' sentences from my novel -The Jade Coterie-
Ch. 1
Ebony didn’t look back to see which one. She willed her legs to move and ran for all she was worth, shoes in hand, across the cool grass headed for the dark wood door of the Jade Manor.
 Ch. 2
 Heat rushed over her cheeks but she forced herself to meet his eyes head on, only she was forced to look away first as one of the twins behind her tripped and pushed Ebony into the stairwell.

Ch. 3
 How in the hell would she manage to run in them?
 

17 comments:

Jeannette said...

Chapter 1 is a great cliffhanger. I can tell she's running towards something big.

Kyra Lennon said...

Great hangers! I like the second one the most!

J. A. Bennett said...

The last one made me laugh! I want to know more :)

Bethany Elizabeth said...

Fantastic! I loved the first chapter ending, it all sounds really interesting and exciting. :)

Nancy Thompson said...

Ooo, and these are only the first 3 chapters. So very good! Excellent!

1000th.monkey said...

Oooh, neat setting implied in #1, I'd definitely want to know the story behind that building...

Old Kitty said...

Oh wow!! Such suspense and plenty action!!! Go Ebony!!! Yay! take care
x

Ink in the Book said...

Great way to end a chapter. Or two. Or three!

L.M. Miller said...

Awesome final one.

elizabeth seckman said...

THANK YOU for taking off her shoes!!! I hate it when women run across grass in high heels...why don't movies get as smart as writers?

The Golden Eagle said...

I love the last sentence!

Hope Roberson said...

Great hangers! They build on each other so well!

Jenny Morris said...

I agree totally with Hope, each chapter builds on the other!! I want to know what she's going to run in.

Thanks so much for participating!!!

Trisha said...

I think #2 is my favourite :)

Carol Kilgore said...

Like the last one :)

Cassie Mae said...

Amazing hangers! #2 was my favorite, but I'm all about coming up with different ways to describe blushing. You did perfectly! :)

Kelley Lynn said...

Haha. That last one is great!

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