Today is part two of the Hookers and Hangers blogfest hosted by Falling for Fiction. I'm supposed to post the last sentence to my first three chapters. Here goes...
My 'hanger' sentences from my novel -The Jade Coterie-
Ch. 1
Ebony didn’t look back to see which one. She willed her legs to move and ran for all she was worth, shoes in hand, across the cool grass headed for the dark wood door of the Jade Manor.
Ch. 2
My 'hanger' sentences from my novel -The Jade Coterie-
Ch. 1
Ebony didn’t look back to see which one. She willed her legs to move and ran for all she was worth, shoes in hand, across the cool grass headed for the dark wood door of the Jade Manor.
Ch. 2
Heat rushed over her cheeks but she forced herself to meet
his eyes head on, only she was forced to look away first as one of the twins
behind her tripped and pushed Ebony into the stairwell.
Ch. 3
How in the hell would she manage to run in them?
17 comments:
Chapter 1 is a great cliffhanger. I can tell she's running towards something big.
Great hangers! I like the second one the most!
The last one made me laugh! I want to know more :)
Fantastic! I loved the first chapter ending, it all sounds really interesting and exciting. :)
Ooo, and these are only the first 3 chapters. So very good! Excellent!
Oooh, neat setting implied in #1, I'd definitely want to know the story behind that building...
Oh wow!! Such suspense and plenty action!!! Go Ebony!!! Yay! take care
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Great way to end a chapter. Or two. Or three!
Awesome final one.
THANK YOU for taking off her shoes!!! I hate it when women run across grass in high heels...why don't movies get as smart as writers?
I love the last sentence!
Great hangers! They build on each other so well!
I agree totally with Hope, each chapter builds on the other!! I want to know what she's going to run in.
Thanks so much for participating!!!
I think #2 is my favourite :)
Like the last one :)
Amazing hangers! #2 was my favorite, but I'm all about coming up with different ways to describe blushing. You did perfectly! :)
Haha. That last one is great!
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