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Going with sayings and slogans for my characters...here is what I have thought about for Ryan: Remember his thing is chemistry...
1)"I'm a chemist, I don't wait on the sidelines, I react..."
3) "Double nitrate!" I'm thinking he could say this either when something goes right or wrong, because after all the double nitrate is the strongest bonding...
or maybe he could kind of drop random bits of information when he feels awkward or wants to try and start up conversation?
I'm also going to make his reaction through dialogue nice when Sorena's is not so nice...
she can tell him he's and ass, and he can tell her she's beautiful? something along those lines?
I have about 3 pages done so far...so much has to happen in such short page frames...I mean within the first three pages atleast four events need to happen for the story to move forward properly. And i only have ten pages to work with.
I've decided if I can just get to the end of the story by October 31st, then even if it is longer, I can submit it for critique with my crit group and some friends, see what they think can be trimmed out as well as looking for mistakes I've made and that should hopefully put me in ten page ballpark.
So I'm making progress and am confident I will have this done before NaNo begins!
What do you think for Ryan?