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8 sentences from my novel Bloodstone
* Sorry, I chose not to continue from last weeks mainly because I want to leave you all hanging- wondering what happens and why.
* Sorry, I chose not to continue from last weeks mainly because I want to leave you all hanging- wondering what happens and why.
If anyone ever asked Razzle, Charmaine was over confident. His Master would find the bloodstone and beat the rebellion back. Charmaine wouldn’t even know what hit her.
Smelly human, he could claw at her insides and eat her fat while she gasped for air when his Master was through with them all.
Razzle giggled and licked his fingers. He sniffed the air.
29 comments:
Thanks for sharing this. Sounds intriguing. And loved your query on Matt's blog, BTW.
Not what I was expecting! Sounds intriguing.
Oooh creepy& intruiging - love it!
Wow, Razzle sounds creepy as hell.
Oh, he sounds very very creepy. I'm assuming he's not the hero. lol
Yeah, interesting stuff, I liked the notion of her sensing something magically that she can't see.
Who's POV is this in - Razzle or Lady Charmaine?
Ewww, but in a good way, as in I'm fascinated and want to read more! Terrific excerpt!
"claw at her insides and eat her fat" gave me the chills. Powerful imagery!
Interesting 8. I tweeted.
Wicked little thing! Loved it!
Great sense of the macabre in this snippet. Well done!
Lol @ smelly human... Love it, want to see more. Great job Summer :)
How absolutely chilling and twisted. Just ... wow!
Wow! Loved the word picture you painted. And the licking fingers and sniffing the air. Great 8!
Oh wow, this snippet is full of delicious detail!
Razzle--wonderful name for the creature he seems to be!
Creepy and intriguing. I enjoyed this snippet.
What sort of creature is Razzle? Cat? Dog? Werewolf? Really creepy butler?
Great sense of his character in these eight.
Hehehe! Loved it!
Wow, I hope the "smelly human" prevails over this creep and his master! Wonderfully icky snippet.
~Joyce Scarbrough
Oh man, creepy is the first word that comes to mind! Given that shuddery atmosphere, one doesn't expect a name like Razzle - cool! Great excerpt, really curious about what's going on now.
Oh wow... Razzle gives me the creeps. What a weird little thing he is..
For some reason I think of Gollum reading this. Some powerful visuals. :)
Yeesh, I don't think I like this guy. ;) Good job of making my skin crawl while hanging on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to happen.
Terrific character description -- Razzle is awesome! ;D
Ohhhh, that Razzle scares me a little. ;)
whoa! Clawing and eating! holee... :D
Sounds great, Summer! Keep it up~ <3
Razzle and this Master of his sound very creepy. :)
Razzle obviously has some crazy skills. Licking his fingers and smelling the air--not good for Charmaine.
Oooo Summer, this is so different from what I would expect. Chillingly creepy.
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