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8 sentences from my novel Bloodstone
She threw up just as Aurora stepped past, missing her dress but catching Aurora’s shoes.
Aurora jumped back. “Disgusting!”
Ebony wiped her mouth with the back of her bare arm, there wasn’t much else to use. “I’d say I’m sorry, but you deserved it.” Her stomach clenched.
8 comments:
Ooh! Tasty! That was a cruel 8 sentences... I need more :o)
Lx
You dont even want to know how many times, in my much younger days, someone has puked on my shoes. LOL. Not for this reason but I understand that the stench of death permeates everything and you can actually taste it. Ugh. Very realistic 8.
Hmm, quite a dark situation they're in. Intriguing. Excellent excerpt!
Took a second reading to realize "Ebony" was a proper noun instead of the second in line of a group of creatures called "Ebonies." Shouldn't be a problem in context, though.
I hope Aurora did deserve it. Dark excerpt.
Great use of description to set the mood and action. Well done!
Hi Summer .. that's not so nice! Gory and gungy and rather unpleasantly squalid ..
Great eight sentences though - cheers Hilary
Wow! That was an intense excerpt.Dark and malodorous - even from over here ;)
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