One of my recent poems-
I have been trying out new ways to write poetry-
I have been trying out new ways to write poetry-
Beautiful
By Summer Ross
Mother tells child,
“you are beautiful”
And smiles.
Sunshine outside, laughter rings out
Today
Out rings laughter. Outside
Sunshine smiles, and,
“beautiful you are”
Child tells mother.
18 comments:
Lovely poem. Thanks for causing me to smile this morning.
Mason
Thoughts in Progress
I love it.
Wow!! Wonderful - I love the two way reflection of words going on here - wonderful!!! Yay! Take care
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Aw! I love that. =D
I like!
Aah. That was lovely!
beautiful. I love that it takes on its own kind of form
That's lovely, Summer. It kind of funnels in and then out. Very nice.
love it. Beautiful you are~ :o) <3
Aww, pretty. :) I really like that.
The words of our mothers shape and sculpt us in so many ways, don't they? Lovely poem, Roland
Wonderful poem. :)
Gorgeous! Love the circle of life there.
I love it. Beautiful.
I saw this done somewhere else, but don't ask me where. I always wanted to try it. Very cool, Summer, it takes a lot of thought to make sure that it works both ways.
OOH, I really like that one. :)
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
Oh, bounce back: the reciprocal nature of the bond between mother and child. This is a very clever idea :)
Beautiful! It was really nice!
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