If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Beautiful

One of my recent poems-
 I have been trying out new ways to write poetry-


 Beautiful
By Summer Ross


Mother tells child,
“you are beautiful”
And smiles.
Sunshine outside, laughter rings out
Today
Out rings laughter. Outside
Sunshine smiles, and,
“beautiful you are”
Child tells mother.

18 comments:

Mason Canyon said...

Lovely poem. Thanks for causing me to smile this morning.

Mason
Thoughts in Progress

Elena Solodow said...

I love it.

Old Kitty said...

Wow!! Wonderful - I love the two way reflection of words going on here - wonderful!!! Yay! Take care
x

Carolyn V said...

Aw! I love that. =D

Jessica Bell said...

I like!

Ellie said...

Aah. That was lovely!

Taryn Tyler said...

beautiful. I love that it takes on its own kind of form

E. Elle said...

That's lovely, Summer. It kind of funnels in and then out. Very nice.

LTM said...

love it. Beautiful you are~ :o) <3

Bethany Elizabeth said...

Aww, pretty. :) I really like that.

Roland D. Yeomans said...

The words of our mothers shape and sculpt us in so many ways, don't they? Lovely poem, Roland

The Golden Eagle said...

Wonderful poem. :)

Talli Roland said...

Gorgeous! Love the circle of life there.

Lynda R Young said...

I love it. Beautiful.

Wendy Tyler Ryan said...

I saw this done somewhere else, but don't ask me where. I always wanted to try it. Very cool, Summer, it takes a lot of thought to make sure that it works both ways.

Jules said...

OOH, I really like that one. :)
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

Elaine AM Smith said...

Oh, bounce back: the reciprocal nature of the bond between mother and child. This is a very clever idea :)

Nas Dean said...

Beautiful! It was really nice!

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