Two things I've learned during revisions:
- Don't under estimate the power of a second strong character, even if he is a vulgar imp named Razzle.
- Anything is subject to change.
- I have reworked it four times.
- I started it January of 2012.
- It's currently into submission.
Here is the first and last lines of Chapter 1:
Ebony’s breath slowed. The sound came from her deceased father’s old study across the small house.
A blue light appeared and he walked through it, leaving the Manor behind.
Wish me luck!