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On one of the days of the week of September 9th, post a kissing scene
on your blog. It can be either fiction or non-fiction.
3.
Please do not exceed 250 words.
4.
This is a blogfest, so visit the other participants and have fun!
My scene- From Bloodstone-
“If I say no?”
Ebony walked herself back until
she felt the cool wall unyielding behind her. He followed without taking his
eyes from hers. The pan fell to the floor with a resounding bang.
“I’d rather you didn’t.” He placed
a hand on either side effectively trapping Ebony between the wall and himself.
She’d rather he didn’t either. She
held her breath as his solid body pressed against hers. A yearning filled her
center between her legs. She ached for it to release. She inhaled a sharp
breath. His gaze smoldered in the shadows between them as they darted back and
forth from her eyes to her lips and then he leaned his face in toward hers. Her
heart hammered. She resisted the urge to push up against him. She closed her
eyes unable to watch. Kaige’s lips brushed lightly over the top of hers. Barely
a touch. A sigh escaped her lips.
“I’ve wanted to do this since the
night you found me in your house. Say yes.” His whispered words roved over the
sensitive flesh. Hot, sweet, words. A feeling Ebony never wanted to end.
Ebony arched her back and neck to
meet him, but their lips didn’t quite touch. It was as if he were teasing her
on purpose, keeping both their desires at bay. She felt the soft exhale, the
hovering presence of his lips not even an inch away. She wanted to pull him
closer but dared not move any further. Yes.
The word hovered on the tip of her tongue.
"Pardon my interruption."
18 comments:
Very nice.
I will not pardon the interruption. Be gone, interrupter, we need her to say 'yes'!
Very nice.
I will not pardon the interruption. Be gone, interrupter, we need her to say 'yes'!
Who interrupted?!?! How rude! LOL!!!
Phew!! Off I go to find a bucket of cold water now...! :-)
Take care
x
Holy Cats! What timing on that interruption.
The interrupter is in trouble!
LOL, that interrupter needs to be shot. :D
Great scene!
Nice passion, especially near the end.
No! Say yes, quick.
Ah, the cliffhanger! Very well done, love the tease!
Gah--what a time to interrupt! :) Great entry!
Kaige is smooth. EEK Totally love that move where he traps her between himself and the wall. *shivers* Great snippet!
Excellent tension. You're very good at teasing the reader! Thank you for participating in the blogfest.
Nice anticipation and a well done tease.
Great tension. And of course, the moment is interrupted. ;)
Wow, what a time for an interruption but perhaps it was for the best?
Second Aldrea. I have a little intervener in my excerpt as well. Excellent work, the passion was burning.
AMAZING! Great, great scene!
Did that person have to interrupt at the crucial moment?
Just when things were heating up...
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