If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Monday, September 9, 2013

Blogfest- More than just a kiss-

“A kiss, when all is said, what is it? 'Tis a secret told to the mouth instead of to the ear.” ~ Edmond Rostand





The rules are simple:
1. Sign up on the linky list and post the badge on your blog.
2. On one of the days of the week of September 9th, post a kissing scene on your blog. It can be either fiction or non-fiction.
3. Please do not exceed 250 words.
4. This is a blogfest, so visit the other participants and have fun!
My scene- From Bloodstone-
 
“If I say no?”
Ebony walked herself back until she felt the cool wall unyielding behind her. He followed without taking his eyes from hers. The pan fell to the floor with a resounding bang.
“I’d rather you didn’t.” He placed a hand on either side effectively trapping Ebony between the wall and himself.
She’d rather he didn’t either. She held her breath as his solid body pressed against hers. A yearning filled her center between her legs. She ached for it to release. She inhaled a sharp breath. His gaze smoldered in the shadows between them as they darted back and forth from her eyes to her lips and then he leaned his face in toward hers. Her heart hammered. She resisted the urge to push up against him. She closed her eyes unable to watch. Kaige’s lips brushed lightly over the top of hers. Barely a touch. A sigh escaped her lips.
“I’ve wanted to do this since the night you found me in your house. Say yes.” His whispered words roved over the sensitive flesh. Hot, sweet, words. A feeling Ebony never wanted to end.
Ebony arched her back and neck to meet him, but their lips didn’t quite touch. It was as if he were teasing her on purpose, keeping both their desires at bay. She felt the soft exhale, the hovering presence of his lips not even an inch away. She wanted to pull him closer but dared not move any further. Yes. The word hovered on the tip of her tongue. 
"Pardon my interruption."
 

18 comments:

Aldrea Alien said...

Very nice.
I will not pardon the interruption. Be gone, interrupter, we need her to say 'yes'!

Aldrea Alien said...

Very nice.
I will not pardon the interruption. Be gone, interrupter, we need her to say 'yes'!

Old Kitty said...

Who interrupted?!?! How rude! LOL!!!

Phew!! Off I go to find a bucket of cold water now...! :-)

Take care
x

Huntress, aka CD Coffelt said...

Holy Cats! What timing on that interruption.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

The interrupter is in trouble!

Julie Flanders said...

LOL, that interrupter needs to be shot. :D
Great scene!

Nancy LaRonda Johnson said...

Nice passion, especially near the end.

L. Diane Wolfe said...

No! Say yes, quick.

Yolanda Renee said...

Ah, the cliffhanger! Very well done, love the tease!

Meradeth Houston said...

Gah--what a time to interrupt! :) Great entry!

Cecilia Robert said...

Kaige is smooth. EEK Totally love that move where he traps her between himself and the wall. *shivers* Great snippet!

Christine Rains said...

Excellent tension. You're very good at teasing the reader! Thank you for participating in the blogfest.

M Pax said...

Nice anticipation and a well done tease.

Patricia Lynne said...

Great tension. And of course, the moment is interrupted. ;)

Sally said...

Wow, what a time for an interruption but perhaps it was for the best?

Sheena-kay Graham said...

Second Aldrea. I have a little intervener in my excerpt as well. Excellent work, the passion was burning.

Kyra Lennon said...

AMAZING! Great, great scene!

Michelle Wallace said...

Did that person have to interrupt at the crucial moment?
Just when things were heating up...
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