If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Sunday, September 1, 2013

WWW- Sunday snippet (End of scene)




I'm out of town until Monday evening. Please be patient as I will make my rounds this week to catch up with you all.


Catch up: Ebony found an intruder in her home, tied him to a chair with a dangling cast iron pan- he moves it hits him.he escapes causing the pan to fly back into the wall and pins Ebony between him and the sink. He told her to stay out of it and asked if he needed to tie her up...


                        8 sentences from - Bloodstone 



Ebony cleared her throat. “No.”
“I’m going to leave out the front door. Turn around in ten seconds. Nod if you understand.” His hands were hot against hers.
Ebony nodded. Instantly he let her go, his warmth evaporating as the air cooled her blush. He and her pan were gone when she turned around.

~ Next week the Imp Razzle will make his debut appearance in Bloodstone (POV switch)~


 

12 comments:

charmainegordon author said...

I like the short and sweet of it, Summer. Nice writing 'air cools her blush with the pan gone'

Cindy Amrhein said...

Stranger and stranger. What's this guy up too? Nice job keeping me in suspense!

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Owllady said...

Ha, he took her pan?! A memento maybe!

Curious what she thinks about the encounter, now that he's gone. What *was* he doing in her house??

S. J. Maylee said...

He took the pan! OMG, too much. I'm loving these snippets and I can't wait for next week. :)

caitlinsternwrites said...

He took the pan with him? Odd.

At least he didn't get violent, which makes me really curious about what he was doing...

Millie Burns said...

He took her pan! I still wanna know what he was doing in her house...!

Jack said...

Anything with a pan is fun. They just make things so much more interesting 8-D

gemma parkes said...

Oh I wonder who he is and what he wants? At least he didn't hurt her.

Linda said...

He is fast. This is a really strange story, we still don't know what the hell he was doing there uninvited.

stevie-carroll said...

Another intriguing eight there.

stevie-carroll said...

Another intriguing eight there.

sarahballance said...

What a tense scene. And I LOVE that he took the pan! That was a great touch. :)

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