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I'm out of town until Monday evening. Please be patient as I will make my rounds this week to catch up with you all.
Catch up: Ebony found an intruder in her home, tied him to a chair with a dangling cast iron pan- he moves it hits him.he escapes causing the pan to fly back into the wall and pins Ebony between him and the sink. He told her to stay out of it and asked if he needed to tie her up...
8 sentences from - Bloodstone
Ebony cleared her throat. “No.”
“I’m going to leave out the front door. Turn
around in ten seconds. Nod if you understand.” His hands were hot against hers.
Ebony nodded. Instantly he let her go, his warmth
evaporating as the air cooled her blush. He and her pan were gone when she
turned around.
~ Next week the Imp Razzle will make his debut appearance in Bloodstone (POV switch)~
12 comments:
I like the short and sweet of it, Summer. Nice writing 'air cools her blush with the pan gone'
Stranger and stranger. What's this guy up too? Nice job keeping me in suspense!
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Ha, he took her pan?! A memento maybe!
Curious what she thinks about the encounter, now that he's gone. What *was* he doing in her house??
He took the pan! OMG, too much. I'm loving these snippets and I can't wait for next week. :)
He took the pan with him? Odd.
At least he didn't get violent, which makes me really curious about what he was doing...
He took her pan! I still wanna know what he was doing in her house...!
Anything with a pan is fun. They just make things so much more interesting 8-D
Oh I wonder who he is and what he wants? At least he didn't hurt her.
He is fast. This is a really strange story, we still don't know what the hell he was doing there uninvited.
Another intriguing eight there.
Another intriguing eight there.
What a tense scene. And I LOVE that he took the pan! That was a great touch. :)
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