If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Wednesday, January 5, 2011

New creations Blogfest Entry

I am 29 yrs old today!!!


Welcome everyone to my New creations blogfest. I can't wait to read everyone's 2 sentences! Thank you all so very much for participating!


 My rules are simple, one sentence is your favorite last line from one story last year.


 and one brand new sentence to start something new.

The list of everyone who joined is at the top of this post, just click and go read.

 Here are mine:


 My favorite last line from one of my short stories is from a ghost story I wrote...
"The breeze ruffled Alise’s hair and she walked back into the truly empty apartment knowing the shadow that had tormented her all these years was gone."

and my brand new starting sentence for a new story for this year is: 
"He kissed her shoulder and the familiar pop in her back told her it was time to leave before feathers sprang up one by one."

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Word to the writer "Series" and blogfest

First- don't forget my New creation blogfest is tomorrow, I can't wait to see your 2 sentences! Sign up at the top of my blogposts

I'm not all wise and knowing, but I have strolled around the block of writing and classes a time or two. So I'm starting this series as "word to the writer" because every essay, short story, poem, or novel starts with a word.


Starting on Thursday I will post my first installment of this series. I'm going to give advise on how to improve your writing. 

Sure there are lots of people out there telling you how to write...but I'm not telling you how to write, I'm going to give you ideas, encourage the best part of your writing to come through, and give you a general idea of where to start revising your project. 

Some of these steps you may know, some of the steps you might not have thought about previously, and some of them you might find inspiration in.


 But no matter which way you look at it, if you do each step, you will be that much closer to a more appealing story. No I am not saying if you do these steps you will be published, but I am saying it will improve your writing.


 Now with that said, look for my first post in this series called "Polish" on Thursday.

Monday, January 3, 2011

2 blogfest entries!!

My first blogfest entry is the Show me yours blogfest 
I tried to keep both entries short so it will be easy to get through.
Here is a piece from one of my NaNo projects.

I don't have a title yet, its a fantasy piece.



Jude snuck through the window to the small cottage. The charm sat in a clear container on the mahogany table. There were other materials with it, but he only sought the charm. The simple white square with a silver heart dangling in its middle protected any who wore it from danger. He had to have it. With the charm around his neck he could break into any bank, any house, or even walk underwater as long as the piece hung around his neck. Since his trade involved regular break-ins, the charm would pretty much guarantee he succeeded. Oh how jealous the other traders would be if he had it. Everything he ever wanted would be at his finger tips, the prestige of his trade, the money, and the women. Only one person could take the opportunity away from him: Astra, the witch hogging the charm for herself. Funny thing about witches, stealing from them tends to have side effects.

Before his hand touched the precious jewelry, Astra’s laughter rang through out the entire room. He froze. His heart hammered at his rib cage. All he needed to do was snag the piece and run. He reached forward as quick as he could, the cool metal slinked along his fingers. He clutched into his fist and turned to run.

“Silly boy, you must earn the charm. I can’t allow you to steal it.” More laughter surrounded Jude and then Astra floated in front of him. Her raven black ringlets hung in the air. Her eyes sparkled green. A smile clung to her garnet lips.

Jude’s hand tingled where the charm sat snug in his palm. An itching followed slinking on the surface of his skin and circling its way up his arm until his whole body itched the itch no one could scratch. Jude scratched with his other hand everywhere he could reach. Suddenly it stopped and his body floated before the witch. The charm dropped to the floor right through his hand. Jude watched as if it happened in slow motion. Instantly the witch had the necklace dangling from her fingertip.

“There is a price to pay for this trinket young man. I can see in your heart all that you desire. Let us see how far you will go to have such a wondrous gift.” The charm disappeared. The itch returned to Judes flesh and all he could think was to scratch it and make it go away. His scrapped his skin so hard it bled and then there was nothing to scratch. His hand went through himself. The itching stopped. Jude looked down at his bloodied arms and he saw the floor through them. Panic hit him, had the witch killed him? Was he now a ghost? Where was his body?



 My second entry:


Elana has given a great challenge that I have every intention of meeting in her  100 words for $100 blogfest

The rules: Post between Jan1st and 31st one 100 word sentence(can stray either way 5 words) only using one semicolon if needed. I think I used one comma instead, so hopefully that does not disqualify me.

 Coming in at 99 words is my sentence:


With time and practice I learned how to kiss without leaving a huge mess, to enjoy a sunset with someone I truly care about watching the blues and purples collide in clouds before the end of a summer day and to pretend that if I did not acknowledge something bad it was less likely to exist directly but found a way of haunting me in the end showing me how to deal with the world in a better way encouraging better relationships with my family and friends and ultimately securing my fate as a writer with experiences to use.

Sunday, January 2, 2011

No kiss blogfest entry

This is my entry for the No Kiss Blogfest
read my entry then go check out the others.

Its in chapter 4 of my WIP Beyond Words. Yes I have these things called Works in Progress that are not short stories. (Smiley face)


 Okay so here is my two main characters Luke and Shray. They just got into a fight and have only been around each other for two days.

 On with the no kissing!


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Shray sucked in a deep breath and jumped as the screen door slammed shut. She couldn't sit there and take it, no she'd done that for to long before, she wasn't going to let it happen this time. She didn't need a man in her life and after Luke's reaction, Shray was almost certain he knew how she could get home. Shray threw herself up from the couch and stomped out after Luke, she found him in the stall saddling Blaze.

“Luke, I'm in no mood for these games. I realize I'm only staying with you out of your good will. If you just helped me, even tried, I might get out of your busy lonely life a lot sooner,” Shray said. She was attempting to make the effort to be polite, but she wasn't sure it was working. He wasn't even looking at her.

Luke's shoulders hunched slightly and he turned to face her. He no longer looked angry. His eyes were sad and held something Shray was unsure of, an unfamiliar fire twinkled in their depths.

“Who said I wanted you to go?” He took the step that stood between them and instantly had her face in his hands. Her pulse rocketing to an unthinkable level. Shray closed her eyes and tried to cower away. And then she felt his hot breath barely over her lips. Her heart stuttered in anticipation, then nothing. Shray opened her eyes, Luke let her go, huffed and walked away.

Saturday, January 1, 2011

Eye candy blogfest entry

YAY! Another picture blogfest with writing option from Rambles and randomness  make sure to check out every ones entries!

 Every one knows I love Fairies! and this fairy is my favorite one. I have her hanging on dice in my car. She is also my desktop background picture and I have her on pens and paper!

 Here she is: Blue fairy


There is still time to sign up for blogfests check out my new blogfest tab at the top for some great ones going on this month and my blogfest can be found by clicking this link. New creation Blogfest

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