If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Sunday, August 11, 2013

Sunday- WWW snippet

Catch up: Ebony found an intruder in her home, tied him to a chair with a dangling cast iron pan- he moves it hits him. He's pretty sure Ebony's got something wrong with her, Ebony isn't about to deny it either. Their conversation continues- she wants to know why he's there- he wants her to let him go...

 8 sentences from Bloodstone


Ebony put her finger up to her chin as if she would actually think about it then narrowed her eyes. “No.”

“You have no idea what you’re doing woman.” As if his voice hadn’t been low enough, it actually dropped another octave. If it weren’t for the menacing undertones, it might have turned her on.

Ebony readjusted herself on the chair. “Why did you break into my house?”

Quicker than she expected the man threw his hands up, his face turning red right before the pan slammed into his forehead for the second time. He growled.


Lauren said...

There's just something so hilarious about her hitting him with the pan a second time. I love it!!

Owllady said...

*laff* This girl is pretty brave. Even though the guy's tied up right now, he's got to be loose eventually. That pan provides some humor in a suspenseful situation. I'm interested to see how their conversation goes.

gemma parkes said...

Love the part about his voice turning her on if it hadn't been so menacing! Exciting snippet, wonder what he's going to do now?

S. J. Maylee said...

I'd actually forgotten about the pan and apparently so did he. I'm trying not to laugh, lol. Love her "No" too. :)

Patricia Lynne said...

At this rate, the poor guy is going to get brain damage and not be able to remember why he broke in.

Millie Burns said...

Yeah, why the hell did he break into her house? You've got me wondering. I think he should quit trying to move : )

Anonymous said...

Great interaction there.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Summer - that pan is becoming a fetish - is that the right word?!.. well she's controlling him that's for sure ..

Cheers Hilary

Teresa Cypher said...

Ha! This is a funny scene. Not sure if that was intentional. Summer, you did an excellent job of describing the action! Nice 8 :-)

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