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Catch up: Ebony found an intruder in her home, tied him to a chair with a dangling cast iron pan- he moves it hits him.he escapes causing the pan to fly back into the wall and pins Ebony between him and the sink...
8 sentences from - Bloodstone
The glass fell shattering against porcelain. His
breath came hot across the sensitive flesh of her ear and goose bumps flashed
down her neck. He grabbed her hands pinning them to the counter. Not good.
“Don’t get involved.” His words whispered over her
skin and she closed her eyes. Only part of her baulked at the close contact.
Heat flooded her cheeks as he continued, “Do I need to tie you up?”
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16 comments:
Oh man, things have certainly turned around. I have to know his intentions. What did he mean, Don’t get involved?! Ugh! :)
Yikes, things changed significantly in her situation in just a few lines...augh! Nice eight...leaves me breathless too!
Oh no. The tables are turning. How will Ebony get out of this? =)
Uh oh, big trouble, and maybe in more than one way ;-) I think maybe she's a bit attracted to this guy. Really curious about what you've got planned for next week!
I'm still trying to figure this out. Is this a rape scene, or is this role playing? And what does he mean by, "Don't get involved?" Didn't he break into her house? Intriguing....
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Oh no! Hope she can get out of this. Nice, tense scene Summer!
No tying up,please but you've written one terrific scene. Hot breath and all. Check spelling of balking. Otherwise super!
Don't get involved? It's her place! Ooh I wonder what's going on, great intrigue.
Wow! Maximum intensity built into this scene - what a great 8! :)
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I really like your 8 sentences. Summer... so very intense! This is my 1st time on your site, but I will be back for certain :)
Hmm, gotta wonder what exactly he has in mind. Good snippet.
What the hell is he talking about?
Why is she closing her eyes? Oh God it's getting scary.
Hi Summer - fascinating turn of events .. what'll happen now - can't wait to read the next instalment ..
Cheers Hilary
Another great cliffhanger there.
Interesting scene. I'll be waiting to see more as I can't decide what he's up to at all.
Thanks for sharing.
You've set up an intense scene here. Nice 8!
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