Catch up: Ebony found an intruder in her home, tied him to a chair with a dangling cast iron pan- he moves it hits him. He's pretty sure Ebony's got something wrong with her, Ebony isn't about to deny it either. Their conversation continues- she wants to know why he's there- he wants her to let him go...
8 sentences from - Bloodstone
Ebony straightened, if he continued to pull on the
rope, he’d find his way loose, Shit. Ebony
pushed her chair back to the table and said, “Every time you pull your hands up, that
pan will hit you.” She stepped over to the sink nonchalantly assessing the
tightness of the ropes; the last thing she wanted was for him to find a
weakness in them. She briefly considered calling the cops, deciding it would
take too long for them to respond, she figured she’d let her curiosity play
out.
“So I noticed,” his voice sent chills down her
spine. Yup he’s pissed.
“Why
did you break into my house?” Satisfied the rope wasn’t coming lose, Ebony
turned on the faucet and filled a glass of water. She’d barely put the rim to
her lip when his chair scuffed on the floor, the pan flew back into the wall,
and he fastened her between him and the sink.
14 comments:
I didn't see that coming. Fascinating. :) I have to know more! Well done.
Uh-Oh. Clever boy. I like that he's not playing by her rules.
Argh! What a way to leave me hanging! this is great! I'm dying to know what happens now that he's got her pinned!
Oooo...what a place to leave us hanging. Nicely done.
oh great twist! I love to be surprised as a reader and this sure did it. Bet the conversation gets a lot more interesting now ;)
Wow, what an exciting final line! Can't wait to see how she gets out of this one. That is, if she wants to. ;) Great job!
Hi Summer .. she let her guard slip - now what happens next ... great story line ... cheers Hilary
No! Exciting 8! Hope he has something...nice on his mind!
Love the way you left it! More!
Oh shit! I hope she can use her glass fast enough on his face. Damn those ropes!
Cliffhanger :)
Dang! Exciting stuff! Can't wait to see what he does next :D Great 8!
I hope she's got something else to clunk him with...
A great cliffhanger there.
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