If I had to describe myself, it would be in a word that has many meanings with a complexity which falls off the tongue.
A word made up of many elements, is deceptive in appearance, and creates an illusion from the imagination.
My word would be Phantasmagoric. ~Summer Ross

Thursday, May 2, 2013

Don't Move

Day two and I wove in and out of stories on my first day. But I managed. 605 words plus I rewrote chapter one of my WIP- yet again.... My favorite lines: 



“Don’t move. You won’t like the outcome,” Ebony said.

“What the…” His head rolled as he looked down at his tied wrists. She watched his hands come up as he struggled and the pan came down, slamming into his face. “Fuck!”

“I told you not to move.” 
 Story a day in May challenge 1/1

10 comments:

Elaine Smith said...

Ouch! We'll it wasn't as if she hadn't warned him ;)

Old Kitty said...

Oh gosh another blogfest!?!? Wow! You are amazing!! take care
x

Laura Marcella said...

That's a lot of words. Good work!!

Happy reading and writing! from Laura Marcella @ Wavy Lines

Christine Rains said...

She did warn him! Hehehe.

Teresa Cypher said...

Ouch! I didn't see that coming. :-)

Jai said...

I love those lines.

M Pax said...

She's brutal in a fun way. :) Wow, another challenge? Good luck, Summer. Glad you're making progress with your writing.

The Golden Eagle said...

LOL. Can't say she didn't warn him beforehand!

Stina Lindenblatt said...

Great lines!

Ah, the dreaded chapter one rewrite. :P

Patricia Lynne said...

Ouch! I can see why you like that bit though. lol

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